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Your Elevator Pitch is Costing You Clients: Here’s How to Fix It

By: Danny Iny

 

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“What Do You Do?”

 
It’s the worst question in the world. The question that has even the most confident of coaches and consultants squirming in their seat. The question that causes you to take a deep breath and put your brain in gear to explain the value you have to offer in the best possible way, so they get it and want to hire you.
 
And even though you know what an elevator pitch is and even though it’s a piece of cake explaining it to some people who already “get” you and your work and walk in your circles, nothing prepares you for having to start from scratch and relate to a person, or an audience you don’t already know.
 
If you’re struggling with your message and explaining to people what you do so they can’t wait to work with you, then you’re not the only one.
 
Defining what you do is way more difficult than doing what you do. Delivering the value to your client is easy—but being able to describe to a complete stranger what you do and how you do it, so that they are sufficiently impressed to want to hire you? That’s a whole ‘nother ball game—and there are a few things you need to get straight in your head before you can do it effectively.
 
Hang with me, and I’ll lay these out for you, so by the end of this post you’ll know exactly what you need to say to get more clients on your books straight away.
 
Take Your Prospect On A Journey
 
Starting from cold doesn’t work.
 
Yet, how do you explain what you do without sounding like everyone else? Of course you want to avoid canned responses and patter. Additionally there are only so many root problems you can address in your particular niche, right?
 
All in all it’s pretty difficult to attract clients and get them to understand the value you have to offer them, if you haven’t already got a formula that works. But before you get into the HOW of capturing people’s attention and converting them into clients you need to have a few basics down. These basics will then make everything that comes later: website copy, emails, lead generation copy, the about me page—so much easier.
 
The reason you’re struggling at the moment is because you can’t say quite how you’re any different from everyone else.
 
Before someone buys from you, they need to know what you stand for and what you’re going to deliver. The trouble is, if you’re promising just the same lukewarm message as everyone else you’re not going to get very far before they move on to the next shiny object.
 
Your message of what you can do needs to be red hot, and hit all their buttons, and in order to do this it needs to speak to their pain: i.e. solving their problem. In order to know this though, you need to know WHO you want to work with.
 
The Root of The Problem can be summarized in:
 
  • Not really knowing who you want to work with, and what their biggest pain is
  • Not knowing what makes you stand out from everyone else doing what you do
  • Not really knowing how to demonstrate the value you have to offer your prospects.
 
Now let’s talk about how to fix this.
 
3 Things That Have People Lining Up To Pay
 
People need to know what you do, who you are and what value you have to offer them. The trouble is, you need to say this in a way that is relevant and credible, because all the while your prospect is asking, “What’s in it for me?”
 
These three things when done right hit the psychological triggers that switch people into wanting to work with you—before you even open your mouth.
 
1. Your Brand
This isn’t about your logo and font type. These are components of your brand, but not the brand itself. Your brand is the tone you use, the way you explain things, the way you make your prospects feel and the messaging you use to tell someone what you need them to know. This presupposes you know who you want to work with, and how you want to relate to them. 
 
As an example, let’s look at Firepole Marketing: Danny is a business-savvy educator. He talks about “his students,” not his clients; he talks about “trainings,” not presentations. He is also informal, and super-friendly.
 
This comes across in the tone of his emails, the way he invites people to join his classes and the way he describes what you need to do to build your business. You see, his brand seeps through everything he does, and it speaks directly to the people he wants to work with. It’s not about his logo, or color of his business card—if he has one!
 
2. Your Core Client Process
Once you know who you want to work with and what pain you want to address, you need to have a framework that they can relate to so they can clearly see that you can solve their problem.
 
People LOVE to have a system to follow: do this, get that result. It absolves them of responsibility and gives them the confidence that you can get them where they need to be. Your core client process is the system that you use to show people where they need to go and also allows them to see how you work.
 
Wrapped in with this is being able to reveal a bit about who you are and your philosophies as this gives folks the comfort factor that they know how you work and they resonate with that method before they contact you.
 
3. Theme
Tied into both the core process and the brand you use is the theme. This is where you really separate yourself from the masses by giving people a memorable visual image about how you relate to their problem AND how you solve it.
 
How Do You Do This For Yourself?
 
This is all very well in principle, but how do you do this for your own work?
 
Sure, you may need some help to get this just right, which is why I work with people one on one, but let’s get you started right now, so you can start to see how this works and get some results.
 
  1. First off, we need to brainstorm potential themes. Start by listing out all the things that appeal to you: hobbies, interests, and things you’ve done in the past.
  2. Now you need to make sure you know what your ideal clients looks like. This is the kind of person you would most like to work with, not the person you think will pay you for what you offer right not.
  3. Next, figure out what their biggest problem is. It often pays off to talk directly to people who fit your perfect client criteria and find out first hand rather than trying to hallucinate what they might want.
  4. Come up with a theme that marries what you love to solving one, specific problem, e.g. how to get unstuck when you’ve got too many ideas to pursue, or how to make a leap from a job to a business when you have family dependent on you.
  5. Create an article or free report that clarifies this for you, and your potential prospects—so you can build your website, offer, and strategy around it.
 
Let’s Get You Started Right Now
 
We can get you started right here, right now in the comments. Simply list out the things in your life that make you, you.
 
What defines you? Tell me below in the comments!
 
This article was originally published by Firepole Marketing
 
Laura Leigh Clarke (@EnlightenLaura, or check out her Facebook page) is the Whole Heart, Whole Brained Business Mentor, helping heart-centered solopreneurs to get real results into their bank account. She is also the Hay House Author of Wire Yourself for Wealth, and invests in turnaround companies.

Published: August 26, 2013
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Danny Iny

Danny Iny (@DannyIny), a.k.a. the “Freddy Krueger of Blogging”, is the proud founder of Firepole Marketing. He’s also the author of the Amazon best-selling book Engagement from Scratch!, the Naked Marketing Manifesto, and the Audience Business Masterclass. In addition to all of the above, Danny is a super-friendly guy who makes a point of responding to emails and messages within 24 hours—so follow him on Twitter @DannyIny, Google+, or just send him an email and say hello!

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